BynineB's Sprite Salad Bowl

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

your outlines, the clothes and their shading all contribute to restricting your sprite's potential.
they could all convey form and volume better.
look at the hair- is it really under the effect of gravity? how would the hair be shaped if it stemmed from her scalp, etc.
here's an edit:

take in count i don't know what effect you want for the clothes/pose.