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The Secret Stall
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A little more direction, maybe?
Like what do you want to do with this piece?
The last part should haunt, I think, but then it is dampened by the fact that for 2/3 of the story, we "watched" a guy struggling with taking a dump.
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The Secret Stall - by Kriven - 02-10-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: The Secret Stall - by Guy - 02-11-2011, 12:08 AM
RE: The Secret Stall - by GrooveMan.exe - 02-11-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: The Secret Stall - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 02-12-2011, 05:36 AM
RE: The Secret Stall - by Kriven - 02-12-2011, 09:34 PM
RE: The Secret Stall - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 02-14-2011, 10:51 AM
RE: The Secret Stall - by Kriven - 02-14-2011, 11:46 PM

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