02-14-2011, 10:51 AM
A little more direction, maybe?
Like what do you want to do with this piece?
The last part should haunt, I think, but then it is dampened by the fact that for 2/3 of the story, we "watched" a guy struggling with taking a dump.
Like what do you want to do with this piece?
The last part should haunt, I think, but then it is dampened by the fact that for 2/3 of the story, we "watched" a guy struggling with taking a dump.