02-19-2011, 02:09 PM
(02-19-2011, 03:33 AM)Guy Wrote:i've edited most of what you've posted until now:(02-19-2011, 03:23 AM)GrooveMan.exe Wrote: Lorelei looks like she's leaning backwards in that pose. See if you can move her upper torso forward a pixel.
I've been trying to add her other arm and it looks so outta place, thank you for mentiong that GrooveMan. I kinda feel like the shading around her legs needs a little touching up as well.
My next sheet update may take a while, as i've mentioned, i'm kinda hooked on Minecraft right now (and i've been sick), however, feel free to request something if you'd like i'll visit regularly.
your main issues are perspective, then shading.