Lia

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Some cleavage on her collarbone.
Sure guy, that makes perfect sense.

I don't even know where to start with this. You might be aware of the existence of ribcages. It's where people - even women - keep their lungs. You seem to have replaced it with perfectly spherical sacks of fat hanging off of her collarbone.
Don't do that.

I get what you mean and tried to fix the problems. But just next time leave the sarcasm... It doesn't motivate me to improve my work and doesn't make me respect you more.
Don't do that.

However i don't know what to do with her arms.

Is this any better