TSR PokeDex Project

[Wes]

2nd Stage of Water Starter
I feel like it's missing something, esp. on the head.

I want to give it a star motif, obviously from the Star-nosed Mole, but idk how. I want to save the "star-on-nose" thing for the 3rd stage.

Ike: i think it's the shading on the clouds that's making them look not puffy.

Replace the cheek circle design with a star shape. Those line sthat you have on that tail that sort of separate them into 3 sections? Make them zig-zags. Maybe give them star-patterns on their bellies, too (or knees and elbows or forehead). You don't have to put all of these suggestions (mix-and match to see what works), but if the final design is going to have a star motif going on, it should probably be introduced in the second stage (or maybe even the first, if we change the pattern on the cheek to a star, it would look less like an eye).