03-07-2011, 04:20 PM
I hope you're not actually anti-meds or I'm going to have to derail and get very very angry. :v
I think you need to study expressions more. The way you draw faces doesn't really say anything about the character's emotions. I mean, this most recent one is probably the best example, what does the "" face actually say about his emotion, especially baring in mind you haven't given him any eyebrows? Answer: very little. Is he focussing on something now? Is he just being thoughtful? Take the words out of the speech bubbles - is it still obvious how he's feeling without their help?
I think you need to study expressions more. The way you draw faces doesn't really say anything about the character's emotions. I mean, this most recent one is probably the best example, what does the "" face actually say about his emotion, especially baring in mind you haven't given him any eyebrows? Answer: very little. Is he focussing on something now? Is he just being thoughtful? Take the words out of the speech bubbles - is it still obvious how he's feeling without their help?