03-23-2011, 02:47 AM
(03-22-2011, 09:33 PM)LDEJRuff Wrote: Here. I'll give you a comparison close-up on what I did so far.
You know, I wasn't actually looking for an analysis. I was trying to point out that you keep making minor edits when you really need to make major ones, or start again, for these to be any good.
Seems Devicho did that better.