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Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP]
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There's not enough difference between the shades. We want to be able to see the shading, rather than having it look, i guess you'd say blended.
For example in the green, either make the light green lighter so you can see the darker shade, or make the darker shade of green darker, so you can see the lighter, and so on for the rest of the sprite.

It's good that you're trying to learn though, a lot of people just take this type of criticism as 'I suck.'

Anyway, the character design isn't that memorable. I mean, you said you wanted a generic skater, well you've done that, but I don't know if it'll call out to anyone as a good design.
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Messages In This Thread
Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by MoePix - 04-18-2011, 07:58 AM
RE: sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by Rakia - 04-18-2011, 02:19 PM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by MoePix - 04-19-2011, 07:06 AM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by thernz - 04-19-2011, 11:30 AM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by MoePix - 04-19-2011, 12:25 PM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by triptych - 04-19-2011, 07:35 PM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by Cobalt Blue - 04-20-2011, 06:12 PM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by MoePix - 04-20-2011, 07:16 AM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by Rakia - 04-20-2011, 09:10 AM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by MoePix - 04-21-2011, 06:54 AM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by tgb621 - 04-21-2011, 09:14 AM
RE: Sk8er themed sprite. [WIP] - by MoePix - 04-21-2011, 10:19 AM

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