04-24-2011, 07:04 AM
I don't think you should apologise on her behalf, it's her problem- she doesn't represent the mspa forums. my issue was more with her rather than the nepetaquest project, so please go ahead and post your work!
generally, i feel your outlines could do with more work.
i suggest you look at the way you highlight volumes: i think reducing their size and considering them more as "highlights" (as in highlight a small, specific part of a volum) and making them a bit more saturated colour-wise could vastly improve your work.
as an overview that's all i have to say.
i'll be looking forward to more!
generally, i feel your outlines could do with more work.
i suggest you look at the way you highlight volumes: i think reducing their size and considering them more as "highlights" (as in highlight a small, specific part of a volum) and making them a bit more saturated colour-wise could vastly improve your work.
as an overview that's all i have to say.
i'll be looking forward to more!
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