04-25-2011, 08:16 PM
I'm not sure what the critique paradigm of this forum is and whether written criticism is preferred over visual edits or vice versa. That said, here's a few readability edits:
![[Image: newguy_edits.png]](http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Zerovirus/Pixelart/newguy_edits.png)
The most obvious one is the addition of selective outlining. Other things include smoothing over the folds and minor shading changes in the legs, as well as cutting out some noise from the hair. I didn't add a single color to the pallete except the darkest shade on the white clothes.
The most obvious one is the addition of selective outlining. Other things include smoothing over the folds and minor shading changes in the legs, as well as cutting out some noise from the hair. I didn't add a single color to the pallete except the darkest shade on the white clothes.