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End of hair seems a bit spiky; such attention to detail doesn't help represent the flow of hair, if you know what I mean. The single pixel of transparency in the middle of the sprite isn't a problem but I generally get rid of them just to make things easier. Some outlines on the boos are too strong and don't use selout enough, and the girl's right hand seems slightly rectangular with the outlining.

One major issue is how the girl's left leg bends into a backwards knee- it looks really uncomfortable when scrutinized.
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Gone and back - by newGuy - 04-25-2011, 06:33 PM
RE: Gone and back - by Garamonde - 04-25-2011, 06:52 PM
RE: Gone and back - by Cobalt Blue - 04-25-2011, 07:02 PM
RE: Gone and back - by newGuy - 04-25-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: Gone and back - by Sengir - 04-25-2011, 07:34 PM
RE: Gone and back - by newGuy - 04-25-2011, 07:57 PM
RE: Gone and back - by Drazelic - 04-25-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: Gone and back - by newGuy - 04-25-2011, 08:44 PM
RE: Gone and back - by Drazelic - 04-25-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Gone and back - by newGuy - 04-25-2011, 10:04 PM
RE: Gone and back - by Sengir - 04-26-2011, 12:15 AM
RE: Gone and back - by Cobalt Blue - 04-26-2011, 07:36 PM
RE: Gone and back - by Gors - 04-26-2011, 09:07 PM

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