05-23-2011, 07:37 PM
(05-22-2011, 03:46 PM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: Erm, what's that, a cow? I can't read it very well.
C'mon Jetters, what it is is literally written right beside it.
The RPG sprites have elongated torsos and sharp shoulders.
There isn't much else; it'd be easier to crit. when you show how you fill it out in the end.
The dragon sprite looks pretty cluttered.
The black lines are not working and your palette isn't working.
There isn't enough contrast in your red colours.
You don't need that many reds in your palette anyways.
The shading itself is also iffy.
There's no real specific way I can say it. It's just bad.
It's not pleasant to look at.