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Unnamed RPG
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(05-24-2011, 10:08 AM)look-a-troopa Wrote: Today is a very special day for half-devil nameless, because today it is finally legal to give names to non-humans in Neo Rome!

Now, what will his name be?
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Are you asking us to name it? Thats not our job, our job is to crit the sprites. And it seems you already named it demonman anyways, based off the filename.

The monster needs definitely more contrast, and if your unnamed person is wearing a tunic/toga, it need to have darker shades to highlight wrinkles, as they both have tons, especially when you move. I also can't see his left arm, just a black line. Sandals need to be darker and something extra needs to be added to the head, just is a plain bald head otherwise. Possibly a leafy crown? Balding hair? Idk. You decide. You also seem to confuse the light source a bot, which is partially a problem to due to your lack of colors. See, his head has it right down on his head, while the toga/tunic has it directly to his left. Personally I think you should have the light source coming down from the lop left or right, as it looks much cleaner, but top down isn't that bad either. Either way, you will have to make that the permanent light source for all the sprites in the whole entire game. Just use one that makes you feel comfortable.


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Messages In This Thread
Unnamed RPG - by look-a-troopa - 05-22-2011, 01:43 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Gors - 05-22-2011, 01:53 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by look-a-troopa - 05-22-2011, 02:02 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by look-a-troopa - 05-22-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Garamonde - 05-22-2011, 03:46 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by look-a-troopa - 05-23-2011, 04:28 AM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Proton - 05-23-2011, 07:37 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-23-2011, 05:55 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Garamonde - 05-23-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by look-a-troopa - 05-24-2011, 10:08 AM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by brandman1996 - 05-24-2011, 04:40 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by BynineB - 05-24-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Sketchasaurus - 05-25-2011, 06:06 AM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Osaed - 08-20-2011, 04:38 PM
RE: Unnamed RPG - by Maxpphire - 08-20-2011, 04:45 PM

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