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My Paper Mario Art (atempt)
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Yeah, the lines all need to be thicker.

Your shading is also all over the place; pick a light direction (should be top-left lighting) and stick to it.

Finally, those feet are not in-style. If you'll notice on any of the other characters in the game, including the big guys who actually have some semblance of actual legs, their feet always point in exactly the same direction.
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My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by mutantyoshi - 04-13-2011, 03:07 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by mutantyoshi - 04-13-2011, 03:48 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Garamonde - 04-13-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by mutantyoshi - 04-13-2011, 07:17 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Chutzpar - 04-14-2011, 06:50 AM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by mutantyoshi - 04-14-2011, 09:06 AM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by mutantyoshi - 05-10-2011, 03:01 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Garamonde - 05-10-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by ChozoBoy - 05-23-2011, 03:28 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by brandman1996 - 05-31-2011, 08:40 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Kitsu - 05-31-2011, 11:11 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by mutantyoshi - 06-13-2011, 12:14 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Iceman404 - 06-14-2011, 12:43 AM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Garamonde - 06-13-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by mutantyoshi - 06-13-2011, 12:27 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Garamonde - 06-13-2011, 12:52 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Chutzpar - 06-13-2011, 12:54 PM
RE: My Paper Mario Art (atempt) - by Snivy101 - 08-14-2011, 04:23 PM

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