06-01-2011, 05:11 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-01-2011, 05:13 PM by brandman1996.)
(05-31-2011, 09:36 PM)FlyGuy95 Wrote: I meant I knew that there was a few things wrong with it, but I don't know everything that's wrong with it. Sorry, I'm not making much sense, am I?
Lol it's okay I know. Ahem...
whut has bean said Wrote:Listen, I know you didn't mean it exactly like that but you should also improve your approach.
(05-31-2011, 09:36 PM)FlyGuy95 Wrote: It's intentional. Ore has a five o'clock shadow.
Oh okay I was wondering this but I didn't know for sure. I guess try to make it more obvious? Idk how your gonna do that but would help.
(05-31-2011, 09:36 PM)FlyGuy95 Wrote: I know. I tried doing some hair shading at one point with darker tones of blue, but it was something I just couldn't recreate more than once. That doesn't mean I'm giving up completely, I've just stepped away from that for now. (I should probably try again on my next sprite.)
OK, I actually think using the darker suit colors for the hair would work... I might try that, too.
Cool, do it. Though do a side by side comparison, because starsock may be on to something. I still think It should have more shades. Though one point that is universal that was stated by him is never use pure black, which, I admit I'm bad at doing myself. Just make sure this isn't true when you finish.
(05-31-2011, 09:36 PM)FlyGuy95 Wrote: Cool?
Not cool.
(05-31-2011, 09:36 PM)FlyGuy95 Wrote: It was part of the character, but I could shorten the back to make it look more like a suit. Yeah, the shoes are tiny. I know I messed that up.
So the pirate blouse thing is the characters skin? wtf. Yeah fix it up.
(05-31-2011, 09:36 PM)FlyGuy95 Wrote: lol The briefcase wasn't a huge part of the sprite, it was just for the sake of posing. But I'll keep that in mind once I make a real sprite of it.
Try to.
(05-31-2011, 09:36 PM)FlyGuy95 Wrote: Thanks for the feedback.
Anytime.