06-03-2011, 12:26 AM
Yeah, the bob is off. He should be at his highest when his feet are directly beneath him. The leg nearer to the camera also looks like its lagging a bit when coming forward - could have something to do with the fact that you're using a frame where both legs cover each other perfectly.
Still though, this is pretty good for someone who is a self-proclaimed novice!
As for a best pose for a falling/mid-jump frame, it really depends entirely on the character. For this one, I'd guess something simple and straightforward would probably work best, so go take a look at the Samus's falling animation from Super Metroid or Metroid Zero Mission.
Still though, this is pretty good for someone who is a self-proclaimed novice!
As for a best pose for a falling/mid-jump frame, it really depends entirely on the character. For this one, I'd guess something simple and straightforward would probably work best, so go take a look at the Samus's falling animation from Super Metroid or Metroid Zero Mission.