06-08-2011, 05:53 PM
They seem fine to me!
Have you tried reading them aloud? It might make it easier to understand how well the speech flows that way.
I dunno, I'm kind of a noob to sequential art x:
Have you tried reading them aloud? It might make it easier to understand how well the speech flows that way.
I dunno, I'm kind of a noob to sequential art x: