06-21-2011, 04:57 PM
overall your stuff is pretty good, it's just there's a lot to go through.
i can see you've made an effort to organize this, but i think if you put in some spoiler tags per category and/or renamed the links it would help a lot!
as for your latest piece: where is it set? how do you think you can make it look more scary?
i'll write up more soon.
i can see you've made an effort to organize this, but i think if you put in some spoiler tags per category and/or renamed the links it would help a lot!
as for your latest piece: where is it set? how do you think you can make it look more scary?
i'll write up more soon.