10-11-2008, 10:01 PM
Too lazy. I will, however, critique it.
First off, it's too dark.
Second, it seems rather flat. It's not selling that whole, third-dimension thing. probably because of the roof. I can see that the roof is trying to make a sort of triangle shape. So, please look here.
http://spriters-resource.com/nintendo/po...rgeous.png
As you can see, you see roofs at at angle, so you should see the front and the back of that roof, one side brighter than the other. I also suggest making the top of the chimney visible as well. The vines look painted on too, so do... somethin' about that.
Third, I really think you should make the windows light blue. Or something. It's just lookin' weird, yanno?
First off, it's too dark.
Second, it seems rather flat. It's not selling that whole, third-dimension thing. probably because of the roof. I can see that the roof is trying to make a sort of triangle shape. So, please look here.
http://spriters-resource.com/nintendo/po...rgeous.png
As you can see, you see roofs at at angle, so you should see the front and the back of that roof, one side brighter than the other. I also suggest making the top of the chimney visible as well. The vines look painted on too, so do... somethin' about that.
Third, I really think you should make the windows light blue. Or something. It's just lookin' weird, yanno?