07-01-2011, 12:53 AM
In case anyone else didn't know what such a "freezie" was: http://www.mariowiki.com/freezie
Okay now for some criticism stuff..
First thing, why is it scaled to 2x its actual size?
What is going on with its top? It looks like pseudo flames (I don't think a freezie looks like that).
Then you should get rid of those lines between the planes (I guess you could also get rid of the outline altogether). Make it look more like they are the planes of a crystal-like structure; right now it looks like a bunch of flat stones formed into a mishappen mosaik.
And then the mouth should be more like some tildes ~~~ than some sharp angles ^^. Furthermore, move the face lower.
Er, that's all that comes to my mind at the moment, gotta move on!
Okay now for some criticism stuff..
First thing, why is it scaled to 2x its actual size?
What is going on with its top? It looks like pseudo flames (I don't think a freezie looks like that).
Then you should get rid of those lines between the planes (I guess you could also get rid of the outline altogether). Make it look more like they are the planes of a crystal-like structure; right now it looks like a bunch of flat stones formed into a mishappen mosaik.
And then the mouth should be more like some tildes ~~~ than some sharp angles ^^. Furthermore, move the face lower.
Er, that's all that comes to my mind at the moment, gotta move on!