(07-01-2011, 12:53 AM)Previous Wrote: In case anyone else didn't know what such a "freezie" was: http://www.mariowiki.com/freezieHmmm...
Okay now for some criticism stuff..
First thing, why is it scaled to 2x its actual size?
What is going on with its top? It looks like pseudo flames (I don't think a freezie looks like that).
Then you should get rid of those lines between the planes (I guess you could also get rid of the outline altogether). Make it look more like they are the planes of a crystal-like structure; right now it looks like a bunch of flat stones formed into a mishappen mosaik.
And then the mouth should be more like some tildes ~~~ than some sharp angles ^^. Furthermore, move the face lower.
Er, that's all that comes to my mind at the moment, gotta move on!
yes, I agree with the about it's top. I will fix that.
As for the 2x thing, I'm used to doing stuff in 2x2 pixels. I could resize it, but it wouldn't be giant. I guess I could take the time to convert everything to 1x1 pixels.
I'm not sure exactly what to do with the "planes", so I'll leave them for now.
And I agree the mouth should be more like that. I may move the face a bit lower, but IMO it looks fine and isn't that big of a deal.
K this is going to go through a major update with fixed things and more frames. I'm determined to make my first sprites posted here the best they can be.