05-28-2008, 11:02 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-28-2008, 11:04 PM by Geo the Fox.)
It's pretty good, except for a few minor beefs I have, which i'll say in this following sentence:
He has no shading, he should be slightly taller, the mouth should go more with his round body and be pushed back a bit along the Z-axis, the eye stalks are too wide and should look more like they're coming from the back, not the bottom, there's a lack of efforts in the dots, and they have no depth, you made the color of the face go out too far and magically change to red when the actual beast has somewhat of a blend, the feet are the wrong color and shape, the nose isn't correctly pointed and this, by the way, throws off the nostrils, the fangs are slightly farther back, at that angle, the skin on the back of the eyes should be seen, the angle itself is pretty odd but whatever floats your boat.
That's all. Nice job!
He has no shading, he should be slightly taller, the mouth should go more with his round body and be pushed back a bit along the Z-axis, the eye stalks are too wide and should look more like they're coming from the back, not the bottom, there's a lack of efforts in the dots, and they have no depth, you made the color of the face go out too far and magically change to red when the actual beast has somewhat of a blend, the feet are the wrong color and shape, the nose isn't correctly pointed and this, by the way, throws off the nostrils, the fangs are slightly farther back, at that angle, the skin on the back of the eyes should be seen, the angle itself is pretty odd but whatever floats your boat.
That's all. Nice job!