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that's pretty nice, also organs

just take care with the arms: her left forearm is making a barrel shape like this ( ) and they aren't like that. Try making it thinner at it gets to the pulse.

also see where her butt would be. The outline isn't connecting with the human body part due to the fins being in front of them. Fix that by making that a continuous line, even with the fin in front of it. The top of her head looks kinda flat too, and the wave's crest could be foamy (but I believe you're going to ge there eventually)

also Salamendra looks better now
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Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 06-14-2011, 05:25 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by x0_000 - 06-14-2011, 05:31 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Cobalt Blue - 06-14-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by isael-21 - 06-14-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Gors - 06-16-2011, 06:48 AM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Boo - 09-26-2011, 07:33 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by isael-21 - 06-22-2011, 11:38 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Frario - 06-23-2011, 07:02 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by x0_000 - 06-25-2011, 08:07 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by LegostormJ - 07-13-2011, 03:45 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Gors - 07-21-2011, 06:32 AM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Untitled - 07-21-2011, 08:27 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by x0_000 - 07-22-2011, 03:49 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by x0_000 - 07-22-2011, 08:25 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Gors - 07-23-2011, 06:42 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by pokerubyfan - 07-23-2011, 06:45 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by pokerubyfan - 07-23-2011, 06:50 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Gors - 07-25-2011, 10:47 AM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Vipershark - 07-28-2011, 05:55 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Gors - 07-29-2011, 05:43 AM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Mag - 07-30-2011, 10:05 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by x0_000 - 07-30-2011, 10:40 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Gors - 07-31-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by SoulFace - 07-31-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Garamonde - 07-31-2011, 08:33 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Silverdabolt - 07-31-2011, 08:40 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Garamonde - 07-31-2011, 08:45 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Vipershark - 08-07-2011, 11:52 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Glitch - 08-12-2011, 06:36 PM
RE: Pokeymans (and other stuff) - by Toastfighter - 08-15-2011, 10:10 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Glitch - 08-16-2011, 04:09 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Toastfighter - 08-16-2011, 10:15 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 08-16-2011, 10:46 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 09-02-2011, 04:37 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Lexou Duck - 09-02-2011, 08:17 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 09-02-2011, 11:59 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by BynineB - 09-02-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by StarSock64 - 09-03-2011, 03:51 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by x0_000 - 09-04-2011, 12:26 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 09-04-2011, 01:12 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by x0_000 - 09-04-2011, 04:46 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Triangle Man - 09-04-2011, 03:33 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Vipershark - 09-04-2011, 03:44 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Maxpphire - 09-04-2011, 03:47 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 09-04-2011, 05:33 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Zadaben - 09-05-2011, 11:05 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 09-05-2011, 10:53 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Gors - 09-06-2011, 03:11 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by PokeOkeOkemon - 09-25-2011, 03:29 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Maxpphire - 09-25-2011, 03:36 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 11-11-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-01-2011, 10:49 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Gwen - 12-01-2011, 11:20 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Gors - 12-01-2011, 02:11 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-11-2011, 04:42 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-11-2011, 08:49 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Gors - 12-12-2011, 07:33 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-12-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by StarSock64 - 12-14-2011, 11:48 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-15-2011, 02:18 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Azure-Tranquility - 12-15-2011, 02:43 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Gwen - 12-15-2011, 01:57 PM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by Gors - 12-15-2011, 07:16 AM
RE: Probably not Pokemon - by megaMasquerain - 12-18-2011, 05:32 AM

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