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A noobs new Fakey-mon
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Welcome to TSR toadkarter Toastfighter!

Allow me to help you with your 'fakemon' here.

First off these don't look much like pokemon at all, most pokemon are based off real life animals, objects and the occasional greek/fable creature like a hydra for example, these only look vaguely like lizards, but don't have any specific traits to a certain one.

The big guy shouldn't have that much dithering on it (which is basically checkering with the colours) And it's feet look awkward as if its trying to tip-toe, also the bright green symbol on the chest looks ugly compared to the rest of the thing, I recommend changing the color or making it darker and blends with the brown.

The little guy who looks an awful lot like spider-man if he were a lizard is better, but still suffers with shading, the head could use some work by shaping it more circular and add a darker shade inside too.

I hope some of this helped, and i'm sure some other dudes will help you with other things I may of missed, cuz i'm dumb.

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A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-08-2011, 07:13 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Omega - 08-08-2011, 07:22 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Vipershark - 08-08-2011, 07:22 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Shawn - 08-08-2011, 07:47 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-08-2011, 07:36 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-08-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by megaMasquerain - 08-08-2011, 08:36 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Sketchasaurus - 08-08-2011, 09:10 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-08-2011, 09:14 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Gors - 08-08-2011, 09:33 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-08-2011, 09:36 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by megaMasquerain - 08-08-2011, 10:20 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Proton - 08-08-2011, 10:35 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-08-2011, 10:39 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Omega - 08-08-2011, 10:02 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Sketchasaurus - 08-09-2011, 01:01 AM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 08-09-2011, 09:49 AM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-09-2011, 04:34 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Star - 08-09-2011, 04:54 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Glitch - 08-09-2011, 04:55 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Toastfighter - 08-09-2011, 05:38 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Glitch - 08-09-2011, 05:56 PM
RE: A noobs new Fakey-mon - by Gors - 08-12-2011, 06:55 AM

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