(08-08-2011, 10:20 PM)masquerain Wrote: If you're not making Pokemon, don't call them "fakemon".
It's not being called fakemon,
they're fakey-mon,
fakey-mon.
fakey-mon.
(08-08-2011, 07:36 PM)Toastfighter Wrote: They also aren't supposed to actually be pokemon, but something new thats reminiscent of that style of game.
He said this before you posted your crit.
You said you've done poorly with describing it to this point.
I suggest going into more detail,
maybe a little backstory,
some traits,
etc.
Would help make something more dynamic in the end.
Like, it's coloured demonic,
is it actually demonic?
Can it come off as more demonic;
like a more savage pose, more fitting details, etc.