08-09-2011, 05:56 PM
Getting a little better, but the lineart is very rough, and doesn't look natural in some places. Your shading is a bit flat and makes it hard to tell that the head is in fact a head, it looks like it's stuck to the body. I suggest re doing it at a 3/4 view or a side view.
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