The Bastard, WIP

[Gwen]

I think the arms are looking a little long and I hope you end up shaping the feet more properly. The pants could use more contrast...I guess we'll wait and see what happens!

edit: oh wow you posted while I was messing around oops

okay uhh
new stuff
make sure you pay attention to the lightsource when you're shading the arms. The way you shaded the pants makes the knees look way down there; the knees should be like halfway between the ankles and the crotch I think. More contrast in the hair, too.

Okedoke, I'll get the lighter shade for the hair brighter, and the pants shading was temp, but I'll get on fixing them up, thank you for the advice!