09-04-2011, 05:19 PM
Am I the only one that expected Triforce pixel art? Or other legendary/important triangles?
Regardless,
Maybe he's looking for positively charged toned critism. So more along the lines of what he can do to improve rather than what he did wrong. Yes I know they're the same thing really, but one way of saying it doesn't hurt ones precious little pride as much.
Any ways, what you COULD do to improve is refine some of the blocks of color, to further define which character is which. At this point its hard to tell whether that fourth one is Kirby or some sort of weird red eye thing with strange vertical eyebrows.
I also think these pieces could highly benefit if every curve was replaced by a diagonal line. Or just geometric shapes... Or just simple curves... Or staying in the lines. Or any combonation of them.
Regardless,
Maybe he's looking for positively charged toned critism. So more along the lines of what he can do to improve rather than what he did wrong. Yes I know they're the same thing really, but one way of saying it doesn't hurt ones precious little pride as much.
Any ways, what you COULD do to improve is refine some of the blocks of color, to further define which character is which. At this point its hard to tell whether that fourth one is Kirby or some sort of weird red eye thing with strange vertical eyebrows.
I also think these pieces could highly benefit if every curve was replaced by a diagonal line. Or just geometric shapes... Or just simple curves... Or staying in the lines. Or any combonation of them.