09-12-2011, 01:31 AM
Those are pretty cool dude. The book could be a little nicer though I think.
Now obviously that's a very weathered book, but its good for what I'm pointing out. See how the edges are nearly as smooth on yours? That's probably the most obvious thing here for me. Though the lack of a sort of weathered look to the pages and the lack of differentiation in the big clump of pages in the middle stick out to me. Adding another few single pages that stick out to make animating look nicer would be cool too. Maybe mess around with bump mapping too, but I'm just throwing ideas out there.
Now obviously that's a very weathered book, but its good for what I'm pointing out. See how the edges are nearly as smooth on yours? That's probably the most obvious thing here for me. Though the lack of a sort of weathered look to the pages and the lack of differentiation in the big clump of pages in the middle stick out to me. Adding another few single pages that stick out to make animating look nicer would be cool too. Maybe mess around with bump mapping too, but I'm just throwing ideas out there.