09-13-2011, 01:42 PM
I honestly can't tell you much about those programs because I haven't actually used them. I've heard good things about them, but you'd have to try them yourself to know if they'd work for you.
About what I meant for the center pages though:
See how in the center all the page ends come together at the spine and spread outward from there? In yours it just seems like there are a bunch missing because they sort of branch out from the sides a little unnaturally. There's also little differentiation between the pages in the two separate page stacks besides at the bottom. Maybe separate it up a bit or something or if they're like that already than use multiple lights to show that? Now that I look at them again, the pages are completely flat unlike Cheato's and have depth like a box when they really shouldn't.
The details shouldn't have to be so inconspicuous that you can't seem them normally at this range either. Its certainly hard to make them look natural and not stand out ridiculously.
Sorry if it feels like I'm asking for a lot, but I just want your work to look its best. Especially so if you want it on the site at some point.
About what I meant for the center pages though:
See how in the center all the page ends come together at the spine and spread outward from there? In yours it just seems like there are a bunch missing because they sort of branch out from the sides a little unnaturally. There's also little differentiation between the pages in the two separate page stacks besides at the bottom. Maybe separate it up a bit or something or if they're like that already than use multiple lights to show that? Now that I look at them again, the pages are completely flat unlike Cheato's and have depth like a box when they really shouldn't.
The details shouldn't have to be so inconspicuous that you can't seem them normally at this range either. Its certainly hard to make them look natural and not stand out ridiculously.
Sorry if it feels like I'm asking for a lot, but I just want your work to look its best. Especially so if you want it on the site at some point.