10-18-2008, 09:08 AM
I'd make the top of Geodude's head more rocky, and reduce the shading on that area a bit.
Graveler's large forearms (mostly our left) look odd (the small arms look great though). Also, I'd make the lineart of Graveler's back more rocky in appearence. But I think his face is fine as is.
Both are excellencent otherwise though.
Also, while you obviously don't need to do Golem, I could bear naught but appreciation should you decide to try him out. But if you don't want to, that'd perfectly fine.
Pink's overworld is looking quite dandy as well. I may try making a couple different trainer sprites for her later, for design ideas, one of which I'll be sure to base off your overworld.
MissingNo looks much too small, and its eyes/mouth are too big and far apart. Looks cool otherwise. But I think Yellow used the same ghost sprite as R/B, so I think Pink ought to retain the sprite as well.
Graveler's large forearms (mostly our left) look odd (the small arms look great though). Also, I'd make the lineart of Graveler's back more rocky in appearence. But I think his face is fine as is.
Both are excellencent otherwise though.
Also, while you obviously don't need to do Golem, I could bear naught but appreciation should you decide to try him out. But if you don't want to, that'd perfectly fine.Pink's overworld is looking quite dandy as well. I may try making a couple different trainer sprites for her later, for design ideas, one of which I'll be sure to base off your overworld.
MissingNo looks much too small, and its eyes/mouth are too big and far apart. Looks cool otherwise. But I think Yellow used the same ghost sprite as R/B, so I think Pink ought to retain the sprite as well.
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