01-05-2012, 05:47 PM
It could use some more contrast, especially on the grays and browns
The closer arm and the opening of the clothes are sharing a line. Umm, I forget what that's called, but I'm pretty sure that's a faulty technique. Since the arm's supposed to be in front, it shouldn't be sharing the exact same vertical line. It should be moved over or something. Sorry, I'm not really sure how to explain it, but if you still don't get what I mean I'll point it out later. The arm and shoulder aren't really shaped right in general. The way the different joints connect looks really awkward, especially the way the forearm connects to everything on the closer arm.
The closer arm and the opening of the clothes are sharing a line. Umm, I forget what that's called, but I'm pretty sure that's a faulty technique. Since the arm's supposed to be in front, it shouldn't be sharing the exact same vertical line. It should be moved over or something. Sorry, I'm not really sure how to explain it, but if you still don't get what I mean I'll point it out later. The arm and shoulder aren't really shaped right in general. The way the different joints connect looks really awkward, especially the way the forearm connects to everything on the closer arm.
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