[Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial

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[Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial

[robo9]

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01-16-2012, 11:52 AM

"Where!!!" is a question, it should at least contain a question mark

The, not "thee"

Capitalize the "it's" in panel 6

See's is possessive. See, sees, saw, and seen are verbs.

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[Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by justover6 - 01-14-2012, 08:00 PM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by Phantom Killah - 01-14-2012, 09:25 PM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by justover6 - 01-16-2012, 11:42 AM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 01-16-2012, 11:48 AM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by [robo9] - 01-16-2012, 11:52 AM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by Gors - 01-16-2012, 12:04 PM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by Lexou Duck - 01-16-2012, 02:40 PM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by DioShiba - 01-16-2012, 04:50 PM

RE: [Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial - by Gors - 01-16-2012, 05:20 PM

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