(01-18-2012, 10:55 PM)X Gamer 66 Wrote: a few quick things I noticed style-wise:I actually noticed the light source after posting it, and I also changed the outline color when I posted the basic shape.
- your light source comes from the left, should come from directly above
- black is not allowed in the sprite except for the the outermost outline, or things that are black like Mario's stache
- use a black outline instead of that dark blue-ish color
- (i could be wrong on this one) I think M&L stye sprites are symmetric about a two-pixel wide line. i.e., you need to make your bee 1 pixel wider or less wide
also, ditch the pillowshading and banding, and see if you can tinker with the roundness of the head and body.
I'll fix the symmetric style though.