10-23-2008, 09:00 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-23-2008, 11:32 AM by Geo the Fox.)
Dear God, I'm going to punch the next person to attempt a PM Kirby.
Through the INTERNET.
His left arm is positioned and angled incorrectly.
The face doesn't appear to carry the characteristics of the style--Make it bigger, and bring the mouth closer to the rest of the face. Kirby's mouth isn't that distant from his eyes.
Cheeks too thin and small.
The shading is nonexistent/basically invisible.
Sucking mouth is blocky.
Arms in sucking blocking.
Left arm (Our right) in the sucking animation is positioned and angled incorrectly.\
Face position in the same sucking anim is off. For every frame.
Arms in sucking anim should move and twitch.
Same for feet, though not nearly as much.
Through the INTERNET.
His left arm is positioned and angled incorrectly.
The face doesn't appear to carry the characteristics of the style--Make it bigger, and bring the mouth closer to the rest of the face. Kirby's mouth isn't that distant from his eyes.
Cheeks too thin and small.
The shading is nonexistent/basically invisible.
Sucking mouth is blocky.
Arms in sucking blocking.
Left arm (Our right) in the sucking animation is positioned and angled incorrectly.\
Face position in the same sucking anim is off. For every frame.
Arms in sucking anim should move and twitch.
Same for feet, though not nearly as much.