01-21-2012, 04:26 AM
Apologies in advance here; this is probably gonna sound mean, but these are just my observations:
From what I can see here, there's no actual style here at all and zadaben and gors were quickly and lazily scrapped together just to say you have something on the page. While they may be only one pose, the sprites themselves don't appear to be functional for anything at all, not to mention the fact that gors looks absolutely nothing like gors outside of sharing the same colors. If you recolored those to something else, I wouldn't know they were gors or zadaben.
What I'm saying here is, just throwing pixels on a canvas isn't good enough.
While that could technically work at higher levels, the OP simply doesn't have enough of a grasp on spriting concepts to even BEGIN to handle a project like this, no matter how small.
You need to drop the whole game project idea until you actually know what you're doing.
I don't want to sound mean here, but there's seriously no other way to describe what you've done so far besides awful. That's really all there is to say about it. :/
From what I can see here, there's no actual style here at all and zadaben and gors were quickly and lazily scrapped together just to say you have something on the page. While they may be only one pose, the sprites themselves don't appear to be functional for anything at all, not to mention the fact that gors looks absolutely nothing like gors outside of sharing the same colors. If you recolored those to something else, I wouldn't know they were gors or zadaben.
What I'm saying here is, just throwing pixels on a canvas isn't good enough.
While that could technically work at higher levels, the OP simply doesn't have enough of a grasp on spriting concepts to even BEGIN to handle a project like this, no matter how small.
You need to drop the whole game project idea until you actually know what you're doing.
I don't want to sound mean here, but there's seriously no other way to describe what you've done so far besides awful. That's really all there is to say about it. :/