10-23-2008, 10:28 PM
You seriously have to work on your anatomy.
Humans are not noodles and spheres.
The colors are good, and the shading is ok, but the forms that the shading is showing is so... Odd.
The walk looks like he's taking a step forward, and then taking the same step back.
On the jump, it looks like he loses some volume. Make it more consistent looking especially the thickness of his body.
The explosion is looking good so far but is still pretty rough.
Humans are not noodles and spheres.
The colors are good, and the shading is ok, but the forms that the shading is showing is so... Odd.
The walk looks like he's taking a step forward, and then taking the same step back.
On the jump, it looks like he loses some volume. Make it more consistent looking especially the thickness of his body.
The explosion is looking good so far but is still pretty rough.
![[Image: ZRdfkWQ.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/ZRdfkWQ.jpg)