01-29-2012, 07:20 AM
There are... quite a few problems:
1. The Jump animation: Okay apart from the fact that the hair randomly grows during the jump. That's not a good thing.
2. The Walk animation: The original walk is far better than the "reduced size" one, which looks stiff and awkward.
3. Snake movement: The sprite itself is very wonky and the lineart is bad. The animation does not give an impression of movement in any way, and looks very jerky and awkward.
4. Snake attacking: There's no power behind it, the snake appears to just suddenly flatten out (and fly for some reason). Give it some frames preparing to attack.
5. Demon entrance: Sorry, this is just... bad. The sprite is very stiff, the animation is very jerky and the "speed lines" while it's falling look dreadful. When it hits the ground, there's no impact, since it doesn't move, and when it grows, it doesn't really have any impact either, and it looks really awkward the way it just... appears.
A lot of these need totally redoing.
1. The Jump animation: Okay apart from the fact that the hair randomly grows during the jump. That's not a good thing.
2. The Walk animation: The original walk is far better than the "reduced size" one, which looks stiff and awkward.
3. Snake movement: The sprite itself is very wonky and the lineart is bad. The animation does not give an impression of movement in any way, and looks very jerky and awkward.
4. Snake attacking: There's no power behind it, the snake appears to just suddenly flatten out (and fly for some reason). Give it some frames preparing to attack.
5. Demon entrance: Sorry, this is just... bad. The sprite is very stiff, the animation is very jerky and the "speed lines" while it's falling look dreadful. When it hits the ground, there's no impact, since it doesn't move, and when it grows, it doesn't really have any impact either, and it looks really awkward the way it just... appears.
A lot of these need totally redoing.
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