10-24-2008, 10:41 PM
Made what I expected to find in this topic.
![[Image: jfdla.png]](http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/jfdla.png)
This green guy is my favorite, very cute.
Honestly, almost none of these guys loook like they can stand upright in the pose they're in.
Removed a lot of the black from the style because at first glance I thought there was a giant black star fish stuck on his side. The shading style doesn't look very consistent either.
You need to use more interesting colors too (not that mine are any better, just used first thing I could mix)
Seriously, it isn't that hard to totally redo something in this style, this thing took me like 3 minutes literally.
Also everything looks really sketchy and unappealing (even if "sketchy" was what you were aiming for (I think I read that in this topic, not sure) it just looks bleh).
So yeah, really remake it this time, it just looks like a quick edit.
This green guy is my favorite, very cute.
Honestly, almost none of these guys loook like they can stand upright in the pose they're in.
Removed a lot of the black from the style because at first glance I thought there was a giant black star fish stuck on his side. The shading style doesn't look very consistent either.
You need to use more interesting colors too (not that mine are any better, just used first thing I could mix)
Seriously, it isn't that hard to totally redo something in this style, this thing took me like 3 minutes literally.
Also everything looks really sketchy and unappealing (even if "sketchy" was what you were aiming for (I think I read that in this topic, not sure) it just looks bleh).
So yeah, really remake it this time, it just looks like a quick edit.