02-06-2012, 05:22 AM
Quote:Just..don't...tear me up apart, if you'd be so kind... >.<
that depends on what you consider 'tearing apart'. We, tSR, are known for giving direct criticism, and we don't like to hold ourselves back when criticizing. Still, we're very honest on them, so probably 99% of what you'll be hearing here will be true problems with your work.
That being said, Hoeloe is right about contrast. You need to increase it, also I believe this is your first walk sequence. That isn't as terrible as most starters, but Hoeloe also stated a key criticism, which is 'knees don't bend forward'. Is your alien character capable of doing that, or is that a pure mistake?
I am going for the latter, so I suggest reading tutorials abour walk cycles. You got many of the basics down imo, but reading a proper tutorial might boost the quality considerably.
will give support later, I gotta go to work!