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[Three Shot] Hinatediz, Hinata and Tomahawk Man vs Godzilla
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I'm sorry but the writing is weak, not much makes sense(especially the character choices. Really, elliot's wasteland made more sense than this) and the entire concept is unoriginal. This is exactly why fan fictions should be avoided. Maybe try creating something original? This is too broken to really turn out to be anything more than mediocre at best.

That picture is fucking priceless though.
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RE: [Three Shot] Hinatediz, Hinata and Tomahawk Man vs Godzilla - by Marth - 02-07-2012, 06:55 PM

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