Thank you all for the positive feedback! Means a lot.
Tried fixing everything else, and even made the jaw a tad smaller hoping that'll fix and awkwardness.
Also tried moving the pecs slightly. Thank you Vic!
(02-08-2012, 08:48 PM)Gors Wrote: the gray bg makes it kinda hard to give C+C because it's similar to the wolf's gray, but that's no problem because I don't see anything C+C worthy at allThanks! Yes, the pants shall be far more detailed especially the rips once I get into the rending process. The grey background is temporary, I just put it there because it is meant for Pixeljoints default background which is also grey.
maybe make his head furrier; those smooth shades don't fit with the character type. Also make thin threads coming out from pants' rips for more detail.
(02-08-2012, 09:21 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: The only thing that somewhat bothers me is the jaws. I feel that the top jaw should overlap the bottom, from what I see on my iPod. Also I think the mouth edges go back to far, he also looks like he is smiling, and I also feel the teeth are too blocky and not pointed enough IMO.Thanks good sir! This werewolf does have a bit of an underbite, and I wish to keep it like that, however is there a possible way to make it so that he doesn't look so "derpy"?
Tried fixing everything else, and even made the jaw a tad smaller hoping that'll fix and awkwardness.
(02-08-2012, 09:42 PM)x0_000 Wrote: Have you heard of Bloody Roar, by any chance? You might get some inspiration from that! (It's a fighting game with a bunch of wereanimals) His teeth don't look very sharp at the moment, I expect him to have some terrifying teeth when you're done with it! >Never heard of it, but I'll definitely check it out. Thanks! And yes, there shall be sharp teeth!
(02-08-2012, 09:41 PM)masquerain Wrote: god this is awesomeMost of the the tension in his leg is on his right side, I tried making it so he's a bit balanced. Not sure how I feel about moving his head slightly, but I can try it out. Thank you!
my only critique is that I think you should angle the head more forward, like have him face the camera a bit more. With how thick his shoulders are I think having the head as is makes him look a little heavy on his right side.
Also tried moving the pecs slightly. Thank you Vic!