Hrm, with those last two lines, I'll see if I can get them to fit the flow.
After my math test tomorrow I'll get to the drafting board, I think I have this thing with making overly short songs, because even though Sludgecore songs aren't generally long, mine are still shorter than most. Maybe I'll add some social issues in another stanza.
Thanks for the input!
EDIT: And I'll stop whoring out attention, I just like feedback that'd I go a bit to far heh
EDIT2: Eh, I'll be tired regardless tomorrow so there's another stanza
After my math test tomorrow I'll get to the drafting board, I think I have this thing with making overly short songs, because even though Sludgecore songs aren't generally long, mine are still shorter than most. Maybe I'll add some social issues in another stanza.
Thanks for the input!
EDIT: And I'll stop whoring out attention, I just like feedback that'd I go a bit to far heh
EDIT2: Eh, I'll be tired regardless tomorrow so there's another stanza
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