02-18-2012, 04:48 PM
the rendering looks pretty nice but the posture needs work
the way she's leaning back seems really awkward and imbalanced
her head is way too far to the right considering where her shoulders are
the feet don't seem like they're grounded
her right foot doesn't seem aligned with the right shin which it roughly should be
the perspective of the belt buckle is confusing, you've drawn it on flat but where it is it should follow the form of the waist
+ what hoeloe said
hope this helps
this could look real nice though!
the way she's leaning back seems really awkward and imbalanced
her head is way too far to the right considering where her shoulders are
the feet don't seem like they're grounded
her right foot doesn't seem aligned with the right shin which it roughly should be
the perspective of the belt buckle is confusing, you've drawn it on flat but where it is it should follow the form of the waist
+ what hoeloe said
hope this helps
this could look real nice though!
![[Image: RuAIooB.png]](http://i.imgur.com/RuAIooB.png)