[Short Film] Bother

[GrooveMan.exe]

Is the dialogue in verse? It flows fairly well. I would suggest you obtain a mic with noise cancelling though, the Ps and Ss are causing minor distortion, and there's a light layer of background hiss (which isn't really noticable until the sound sample ends, which causes a sudden (very noticeable) silence). Most of this can be fixed by running the sample through Audacity or similar. Having the end of a sample fade in volume can work wonders in many occasions.

I'd also suggest white noise, instead of the music you use for the ending. Really cool though, good job.