Mortimers Amateur Spriting Attempt

[Mortimer]

The arms are far too short, and the far arm is too far out from his body to look natural.

The arms are supposed to be 'join points' but that wasn't very apparent, tried to curve the far shoulder abit closer in.

The head is running at an angle

the ear and body are running straight horizontal. They gotta match up.

Couldn't figure how to do the ear, but tried altering the angle of the body somewhat.

Added in 'green' join points where different parts are supposed to meet.

Also changed shape of the head, shortened the torso, lowered the eyes.


Anyway to take a zoomed in shot of my work for better pixel placement? I normally work in x400 zoom but it saves the image at its 100% size.

Now I look at it here I think I need to lower the pecs and bellybutton on the torso.