03-11-2012, 03:20 PM
(03-11-2012, 08:44 AM)Ninspriterx Wrote: @Radular Bastard:Luckily the only other frame I made is extremely easy to fix
You managed to fit a lot of detail into the sprite, that's for sure. But a lot be can taken out because it feels like there's way too much stuff going on. For firsts I suggest removing a lot of black outline inside of it, and easy up on the shading. Easy up so much you barely have any. It also feels like his pose isn't really fighting ready. So yeah, simplify. I would feel so bad too see you already making animations when the basic sprite has more potential to fit cleanly with the style.
@Gaia:
Something tells me you're trying way to hard. I could be wrong. It wouldn't hurt to show at least how one sprite is supposed to look. Just don't end up complicating things.
@Ekoi:
You see where on I the eyes are different sizes due to angle. I suggest going with that. I also suggest redoing the hair bangs so it doesn't look so chunky.
@Ploaj:
Oh my goodness. Well one things for sure, you simply must have more going on that just the tail swaying. Make 'em bob up and down. Kids love that.
and about the feet, level them. I think the style calls for leveled feet.
The pose is to reflect my seemingly lazy nature, but a lot of rangers are very quick so he'll assumedly just be a fast attacker.