[ART] My Random Pictures

[Proton]

There's no other word for this other than mediocre.

It's straight gradient black to white, the worst of gradients.

There is no sense of texture for the fur, making it look bland and boring.


The lines are extremely messy, and there are some white outlines on the side of it from poor use of the selection tools in photoshop.

The font isn't that great, and you smeared words all over the canvas.
The words are too much of a subject and are not placed for an effect, but rather placed because you found the space for them and only for that reason.
The cat just does not stand out, due to lack of contrast and simplicity combined.

The feather could use a lot more work,
or just get removed.
As it doesn't need to be there at all.

You could stretch the "faint voice" part can be represented by a feather,
but what does that have to do with a cat?
If the subject was a bird, sure.

But the 2 subjects don't go together and otherwise clash together.