[ART] My Random Pictures

[Ivyleaf1212]

There's no other word for this other than mediocre.

It's straight gradient black to white, the worst of gradients.

There is no sense of texture for the fur, making it look bland and boring.


The lines are extremely messy, and there are some white outlines on the side of it from poor use of the selection tools in photoshop.

The font isn't that great, and you smeared words all over the canvas.
The words are too much of a subject and are not placed for an effect, but rather placed because you found the space for them and only for that reason.
The cat just does not stand out, due to lack of contrast and simplicity combined.

The feather could use a lot more work,
or just get removed.
As it doesn't need to be there at all.

You could stretch the "faint voice" part can be represented by a feather,
but what does that have to do with a cat?
If the subject was a bird, sure.

But the 2 subjects don't go together and otherwise clash together.

Thanks, actually. I am a new-like artist and need this kind of feedback.
The picture is oldish, actually... Let me check when I made this... Um...
Argh, not on the right computer. Until I can find out later I'm going to estimate 2 months ago. It's just because on DeviantART I got no feedback and I wasn't sure what to do with it.
I do not plan to remake this, but I have gotten a lot better at feathers, and I can use the selection tool properly now without the extra white pixels outside the lines.
I am also minimizing my urge for words.
I will continue to work on my texture and shading, as well as straightening my lines.
Thanks.