03-18-2012, 12:48 PM
Ugh Rhenopolos! They're bad enough, but now there are Bullfango in Portable 3rd... is capcom trying to murder us?
Alright, to crits. I notice that the gigginox's front sprite looks like his mouth is almost on the bottom of his neck, instead of being in the middle, rather. I lengthened it and expanded the canvas to 64x64 (that's the size for 1st and 2nd gen right? or 3rd? either way) i notice that you forgot a few things on him too, like the blobs of flesh at the end of his wings.
He seemed to be pillow shaded on the glowy belly thingies, so i edited that. It seems like your light source was coming from the top right, even though I believe 1st/2nd gen it comes from the left. i also altered his pallete so the red and green go better together with the pallete restrictions. (egh LOL)
of course, it's just a crappy fast edit, but i hope i illustrated the big edits i did. I'd have to say his pose looks a bit odd, but i guess he's doing a body slam, eh?
![[Image: 22cfc6442cdd1cb55068e1e8a63afe4d.png]](http://gyazo.com/22cfc6442cdd1cb55068e1e8a63afe4d.png)
also, i'd suggest giving the jho a more greenish tinge to his pallete, i mean, his tail is known as a pickle, hehehe.
nice to see another hunter on the forums, btw! We should hunt sometime maybe.
Alright, to crits. I notice that the gigginox's front sprite looks like his mouth is almost on the bottom of his neck, instead of being in the middle, rather. I lengthened it and expanded the canvas to 64x64 (that's the size for 1st and 2nd gen right? or 3rd? either way) i notice that you forgot a few things on him too, like the blobs of flesh at the end of his wings.
He seemed to be pillow shaded on the glowy belly thingies, so i edited that. It seems like your light source was coming from the top right, even though I believe 1st/2nd gen it comes from the left. i also altered his pallete so the red and green go better together with the pallete restrictions. (egh LOL)
of course, it's just a crappy fast edit, but i hope i illustrated the big edits i did. I'd have to say his pose looks a bit odd, but i guess he's doing a body slam, eh?
also, i'd suggest giving the jho a more greenish tinge to his pallete, i mean, his tail is known as a pickle, hehehe.
nice to see another hunter on the forums, btw! We should hunt sometime maybe.